Blocked out the second half of the intro, I am having a few issues with the trip at the end, so leaving this for the time being as to get a few more scenes blocked in.
I think, when he points backwards as if to say 'Over there' - he should probably look that way quickly and look back again - I didn't do that, but I think he should, because it makes sense of what he's pointing at - or rather why he's pointing.
sorry Phil, didn't see these come in, I think I have figured out what was wrong, his waist was going up when should of been the other. Almost sorted, but wanted to work on the environment, so might art of at least has abit of colour.
I think, when he points backwards as if to say 'Over there' - he should probably look that way quickly and look back again - I didn't do that, but I think he should, because it makes sense of what he's pointing at - or rather why he's pointing.
ReplyDeletesorry Phil, didn't see these come in, I think I have figured out what was wrong, his waist was going up when should of been the other. Almost sorted, but wanted to work on the environment, so might art of at least has abit of colour.
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