Really lovely concept :) However the person is a little off putting, personally.
I agree with Heidi - get rid of the silhouette, Mark - stylistically he appears to have walked in from another kind of project - you're using him for scale, but he's actually now dominating our view of this piece on account of him appearing too stylised; if you're going to include a silhouette of a figure, he needs the same level of realism as the word he occupies. Reconsider this element - or remove him. Otherwise, lots to find satisfying here!
I will give him a push off the side ;)
I agree - beautiful piece! But a no-no to the little man, sorry : D
Don't be sorry :) I like the advice from you all