Tuesday 20 October 2015

Invisible Cities - Octavia Exterior Low Angle Shot




5 comments:

  1. Really lovely concept :) However the person is a little off putting, personally.

    ReplyDelete
  2. I agree with Heidi - get rid of the silhouette, Mark - stylistically he appears to have walked in from another kind of project - you're using him for scale, but he's actually now dominating our view of this piece on account of him appearing too stylised; if you're going to include a silhouette of a figure, he needs the same level of realism as the word he occupies. Reconsider this element - or remove him. Otherwise, lots to find satisfying here!

    ReplyDelete
  3. I will give him a push off the side ;)

    ReplyDelete
  4. I agree - beautiful piece! But a no-no to the little man, sorry : D

    ReplyDelete
  5. Don't be sorry :) I like the advice from you all

    ReplyDelete